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Capture beauty of the moment
Despite all bittersweet torment,
Look, look deep into the stars
Though there are many bars
Between you and me,
Huge as rough seas.

Higher, higher into the sky,
Wider, wider spread your wings and fly...
Don't let life's cruelties make you fall,
Answer when you hear your freedom call,
Forget your life to live a dream,
Turn your problems into a stream.

Take a deep breath and whisper to air
That there, in your heart, is burning fire,
Walk through the silent, warm night
And wait for the red, calming light,
Let the ruins of your life flow past
And live the moment as you would your last...
©2008-2009 =Etheriana
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Another homework for Conversational English. I have nothing much to say about it, all I wrote says exactly what I think... :aww:

:heart: Etha
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We nerer get homework like that in our school... :|

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Beautiful! You should write poetry more often! I've tried writing peoms in my second language (French), but it never works. You have magnificent control over English.

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One whisper from my lips can open your mind to a world of ARCANE TORTURE! :heart:
When you said: Forget about your life and better dream,
That'll turn your problems into a steam. Did you mean 'stream' instead of steam? Just thought I'd ask ^^;
I lurve it, Alise :aww: It reminds me of you and Matt
:wow: WOW!!! :nod: :heart:

I looooooooooooove it! its so... so. so.. so.... (out of things to say):aww:

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All can be possible... :floating:
nicee... ;) :hug:

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Satriecošs dzejolis! :nod: Tev laikam padodas viss! :D

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Eyes like a sunrise... :floating:
Nenoliedzama Nightwish ietekme :), nice.

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Well, I like this kind of homework... ;p

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Spread your wings and fly away! :floating:
Whoa, thank you so much! :o It means a lot, when such kind words comes from a person who has mastered her poems so greatly... :aww: Thanks again! :hug:

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Spread your wings and fly away! :floating:

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